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Nombre de messages : 7 Date d'inscription : 21/12/2010

Bonsoir,
En fait j'ai des questions à faire , et je voulais vous demander si vous pourriez me les corriger Smile

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Voici les questions , et mes réponses avec :
Describe your own house, then describe your bedroom ?

= We can describe a garden with some flowers, tomatoes... . Inside, we can see a living room, with a TV, a table, some chairs, a biliothec, some sofa ... On the first etage, there are the toilet, bathroom and my parent's bedroom . On the second etage, there are my sister's room and mine room, that i shared sometimes with my brother, when he is here .

2) Would you say you live in a safe area?
Indeed, i live in a safe area . This is very calm, and most of people are some old personn .

3)Are you afraid of strangers? How do you behave around them ?
Yea, somethimes, i can be afraid of strangers. However, i don't show my fear in front of them .

4) what crime is the worst and what punishment does it deserve?

On my opinion, i think the worst crime who can exist in the worldis the fact of " lapider" . It is absolutely awful!For me, the best punishment to deserve is to kill them from the same way .

5) What crime do you think is too severely punished?
pour cette question, je n'ai pas vraiment d'idées.., En auriez vous une? Smile

6) Do you find justice in your country is fair to everyone?
I don't really find the justice is fair to everyone in our country . Indeed, if we take the example of Jean Delarue, who owned some drugs; he had just been arrested in prison for few days, whereas that if some youngs have arrested, it's for much most times...

7) " Crimnals are made. Not born" Discuss the statement

I am agree with that sentence . They become crimanals, by their acquitance, their travel? (= parcours,ce qui ont véçu) and by a element of their lifes who had changed their behaviour...

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"Death penalty is nothing but vengeance" . Discuss

Death penalty is nothing by the fact that criminal according to their crimes who can be very awful, the punishment is just that they died . They didn't suffer, they feel nothing, because they died thanks to some product .

Merci d'avançe!!

Salut, Brice.

= We can describe a garden with some flowers, tomatoes... .
My house has a garden in the back with some flowers, tomatoes, and other plants and vegetables.
Inside, we can see a living room, with a TV, a table, some chairs, a biliothec, some sofa ...
Inside my house, there's a living room with a TV, a table, some armchairs, a bookcase, and some sofas.
On the first etage, there are the toilet, bathroom and my parent's bedroom .
There's a toilet, a bathroom, and my parents' bedroom on the first floor.
On the second etage, there are my sister's room and mine room, that i shared sometimes with my brother, when he is here .
My room and my sister's room are on the second floor. I sometimes share my room with my brother when he is visiting.
2) Would you say you live in a safe area?
Indeed, i live in a safe area . This is very calm, and most of people are some old personn .
Yes, indeed. The area I live in is quite safe. I live in a quiet neighborhood because most of the residents are senior citizens.
3)Are you afraid of strangers? How do you behave around them ?
Yea, somethimes, i can be afraid of strangers. However, i don't show my fear in front of them .
Yes. Sometimes I am afraid. However, I'm careful not to act fearful in their presence.
4) what crime is the worst and what punishment does it deserve?
On my opinion, i think the worst crime who can exist in the worldis the fact of " lapider" . It is absolutely awful!For me, the best punishment ~~to deserve is to kill them from the same way~~. Incompréhensible.

In my opinion, the worst crime in the world is stoning someone to death. I find it absolutely appalling. To me, people who perpetrate such a crime should be stoned to death themselves.
5) What crime do you think is too severely punished?
pour cette question, je n'ai pas vraiment d'idées.., En auriez vous une?
I believe substance abuse (abus des stupéfiants) is too severely punished. The users are victims who should be helped not punished. The sellers, on the other hand, are the ones who should be severely punished.
6) Do you find justice in your country is fair to everyone?
I don't really find the justice is fair to everyone in our country . Indeed, if we take the example of Jean Delarue, who owned some drugs; he had just been arrested in prison for few days, whereas that if some youngs have arrested, it's for much most times...
I don't really feel that justice in my country is fair to everyone. Jean Delarue, for example, was incarcerated for only a few days on a charge of drug possession, while young people spend much more time in jail for the same charge.
7) " Crimnals are made. Not born" Discuss the statement
I am agree with that sentence . They become crimanals, by their acquitance, their travel? (= parcours,ce qui ont véçu) and by a element of their lifes who had changed their behaviour...
I agree with that statement. People become criminals as a result of the company they keep and the path they've chosen to follow in their lives. Circumstances can also influence people to pursue a life of crime.
"Death penalty is nothing but vengeance" . Discuss
Death penalty is nothing by the fact that criminal according to their crimes who can be very awful, the punishment is just that they died . They didn't suffer, they feel nothing, because they died thanks to some product .
I feel that the death penalty has no value since those who have committed the most awful crimes are simply put to death. They don't suffer the way they made their victims suffer. Therefore, it cannot really be considered vengeance.

4) what crime is the worst and what punishment does it deserve?
On my opinion, i think the worst crime who can exist in the worldis the fact of " lapider" . It is absolutely awful!~~For me, the best punishment to deserve is to kill them from the same way.~~ Incompréhensible.
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What Brice probably meant is: “I think stoning is the worst crime that can exist in the world. It’s absolutely awful! To me, people who perpetrate such a crime should be stoned to death themselves.”

Thank you, JRB. That makes sense completely.

Doudou a écrit:: Thank you, JRB. That makes sense completely.

My pleasure! Very Happy

Nombre de messages : 7 Date d'inscription : 21/12/2010

Merci beaucoup Doudou et JRB pour votre aide!!!!!!!!!( vous avez vu juste JRB, c'est bien ce que je voulais dire)

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plz si tu peut corriger mes fautes et explique moi en francais je m'excuse de te deranger mais franchement j'aime prendre un bon note sur le prochain examan.mrc

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exercise 3:
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les chiffres ce ce que je cercle.

writing:

use the following notes to write a short biography of princess diana spencer.

name:diana Spencer,princess of wales
Birth:July,1st 1961
Marriage:prince Charles of wales/1981/Childrn:William and harry
divorce:August 1996
Death:1997/PARIS/CAR ACCIDENT
SOCIAL WORK:international charity/fund-raising figure.

j rien ecrire sur ca au devoir c dommage.

Essay:James Michener,an american writer,said about travelling: if you reject the food,ignore the customes ,fear the religion and avoid the people,you might better stay home".
To what extent can travelling broaden your mind and enlarge your knowledge of the world.

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aussi comment je trouve le texte an advertissement,an article a leaflet, to inform,to persuade,to narrate and expository.
and what means virtual schools.

thinks youuuu

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