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Hello Doudou how are you ? I hope you're fine !

Can you help me to corect very essay ?



It was 6.00 am when my alarm started to ring. This horrible sound completely freaks me out until I stop it.
I turn on the radio and I tried to wake up myself to dancing. That makes me happy but my pleasure suddenly stopped because my radio decided that It was time to give up the ghost. After 5 minutes of sadness I realized that I have to rush myself to get to work on time. I took my coffee on the go. At least I reached the train station but at the checkpoint I was totally scared to see that one person had been killed by a thug. Evil Is really every where !!
People were very impolite they stayed to watch the job of ambulance man. I was very mad at them by their attitude. But I was happy to see that the rescuer was marvellous bye the organisation. A huge helicopter land in front of the train station. I wouldn’t imagine the price of the bill. It’s certainly very expensive but the victim who seemed to be rich and peculiar was keen to go bye air. The rescuers should be very careful of the victim because people were very rude, they never stop to bother them but in spit of that the rescuers stayed polite. They where really handsome. I was so stun by this intervention that the dizzy that I’m forgot why I was there: go to work on time…

Hello, Phil. I'm fine, thanks. Bon je m'en occupe un peu plus tard. Toi tu auras sans doute fait dodo pendant que pour moi ce sera toujours le soir. C'est qu'il y a un décalage horaire de 6 heures estivales entre nous.