Résumé d'un texte

Bonsoir,
J'ai un resume sur un texte à faire . Je l'ai fais et j'aimerais vous demander si vous pourriez me corriger mes fautes .

Voilà mon texte :

The main character is Mr Jake Claver . He has just owned first million . So he decides to change his life: he moved of his small suburban , with his wife,into an elegant london house . He finds out the pleasure of the luxe, and like all the rich people he takes two men to serve him .The one is a french chef called Mr Straggon and the second is an english butler called Kant . The both took madly expensive . However, they bring a preciousous help to the couple : they help them to organise dinner parties several times. In spite of the food wonderful and the service fautless, the dinner were always suck: they were no animations, no spark . In this way, Mr claver worries and asks to his butler what is wrong . This one answers that the problem is about the wine : the dinner is wonderful,yet it must be accompagned by a superb wine, and mr claver serves to his guest a modest wine . Mr claver is annoyed and take advices near his butler to know which are the best wine and order to him to buy all of them event though they are more that expensive .( Mr claver is ready to all to satisfect his guest) .The butler answers then that he will do all he could and he achieves to get of some twenty and forty-fives . Their prices were so astronomical, that even mr claver began to sit up and take notice . The butler arrives to reassure him telling that with these wine, he gets a considerable social asset . Mr claver begins to interest to the subjet, he read some books about it . Also, he does a deal with the butler, who learns him how taste a wine . Mr claver takes assurance and at the time of a dinner, he do notices to his guest the lewdness of the wine . Yet the guest don't take care to the talk of mr claver: It's like if mr claver didn't speak! Then he ask to the butler what is wrong . this one asks that they can't appreciate it because of the too big quantities of vinegar that mr Straggon has put , who spoil the taste . More later in the same night, mister claver mocks his butler: he explains, in front of his butler, at his guest that his butler said that the vinegar spoil the taste . Mister claver laughs at his butler publicly . This one who can't stand that, induce a plote . Indeed, he admits the tricks: In fact, the wine that they are drinking is not a forty-fives, it's a modest, odious, and cheap, spanish wine. Mr Kant and mr Staggon drinks the very expensive wine, keep the bottle and place them on the sideboard, to make believe that it was the very expensive wine, while it was a cheaper wine that they were drinking .



Merci d'avance !!

The main character is Mr. Jake Claver.
En anglais il n'y a pas d'espace avant le point final.
On écrit 'Mr.' avec un point.

He has just owned first million .
He has just made his first million.

So he decides to change his life: he moved of his small suburban , with his wife,into an elegant london house .
So he decides to change his life. He moves out of his small suburban home with his wife into an elegant London house.

He finds out the pleasure of the luxe, and like all the rich people he takes two men to serve him .
He discovers the pleasures of luxury; and like all other rich people, he hires two male servants to serve him.

The one is a french chef called Mr Straggon and the second is an english butler called Kant .
One is a French chef whose name is Mr. Straggon, and the other is an English butler named Kent.

The both took madly expensive .
Both cost him a great deal of money.

However, they bring a preciousous help to the couple : they help them to organise dinner parties several times.
However, their help is invaluable. They help them in organizing dinner parties at different times.

In spite of the food wonderful and the service fautless, the dinner were always suck: they were no animations, no spark .
In spite of wonderful food and impeccable service, their dinner parties leave much to be desired. They are lifeless and boring.

In this way, Mr claver worries and asks to his butler what is wrong .
Because of this, Mr. Claver is worried and asks his butler what's wrong.

This one answers that the problem is about the wine : the dinner is wonderful,yet it must be accompagned by a superb wine, and mr claver serves to his guest a modest wine .
The latter answers that the problem is in the wine. The dinner itself is wonderful, but must be accompanied by a superb wine. So, Mr. Claver has been serving his guests a modest wine.

Mr claver is annoyed and take advices near his butler to know which are the best wine and order to him to buy all of them event though they are more that expensive .( Mr claver is ready to all to satisfect his guest) .
Mr. Claver is annoyed and follows his butler's advice by asking him which are the best wines. He then orders him to buy all of them even though they are very expensive. He is definitely ready to satisfy all of his guests.

The butler answers then that he will do all he could and he achieves to get of some twenty and forty-fives .
The butler answers that he'll do his best, and he succeeds in getting some ???

Their prices were so astronomical, that even mr claver began to sit up and take notice .
Their prices are so astronomical, that even Mr. Claver begins to sit up and take notice.

The butler arrives to reassure him telling that with these wine, he gets a considerable social asset .
The butler succeeds in reassuring him that the choice of these wines will be a considerable social asset to him.

Mr claver begins to interest to the subjet, he read some books about it .
Mr. Claver takes an interest in this subject, and starts reading some books on it.

Also, he does a deal with the butler, who learns him how taste a wine .
He also makes a deal with the butler to instruct him in the art of wine tasting.

Mr claver takes assurance and at the time of a dinner, he do notices to his guest the lewdness of the wine .
Cette phrase n'a aucun sens pour moi. Je peux la voir en français, stp ?

1 Yet the guest don't take care to the talk of mr claver: 2 It's like if mr claver didn't speak!
1. Incompréhensible.
2. It's as if Mr. Claver isn't even speaking.

Then he ask to the butler what is wrong .
Then he asks the butler what's wrong.

this one asks that they can't appreciate it because of the too big quantities of vinegar that mr Straggon has put , who spoil the taste .
The latter says the guests can't appreciate the wine because of the large amount of vinegar Mr. Straggon has put in it. This is what's spoiling the taste.

More later in the same night, mister claver mocks his butler: he explains, in front of his butler, at his guest that his butler said that the vinegar spoil the taste .
Later in the evening, Mr. Claver makes fun of his butler. In front of his butler, he explains to the guests that it's the vinegar which has spoiled the taste.

Mister claver laughs at his butler publicly .
Mr. Claver makes a public mockery of his butler.

This one who can't stand that, induce a plote .
The latter is enraged and hatches a plot.

Indeed, he admits the tricks:
J'ai pas compris.

In fact, the wine that they are drinking is not a forty-fives, it's a modest, odious, and cheap, spanish wine.
In fact, the wine the guests are drinking is not a ???, it's a modest, atrocious, cheap, Spanish wine.

Mr Kant and mr Staggon drinks the very expensive wine, keep the bottle and place them on the sideboard, to make believe that it was the very expensive wine, while it was a cheaper wine that they were drinking .
Mr. Kant and Mr. Straggon drink up the very expensive wine, and fill the bottles with the cheap wine. They then place the bottles on the sideboard, making it look like the very expensive wine.

En général, il faut l'uniformité dans l'emploi des temps grammaticaux. Par exemple, si on commence par le présent, il faut continuer à employer le présent.

Merci beaucouuuuuup :DD