Je suis nouvelle et aurais souhaiter de l'aide car je suis vraiment nul en anglais.
J'ai une rédaction à faire en français concernant un texte en anglais qui parle des enfants d'Inde exploiter dans des usines.
Pour cela j'ai une introduction parlant de l'origine du document et de son thème, à faire et deux grandes parties.
1/ Les faits
2/ Les causes
Voici le sujet
We Won't Leave Our Jobs!
Indian authorities rescued nearly 500 children, aged between 5 and 14 years, in one of their biggest raids across Delhi on Monday.
The raids were carried out by the labour department and the Delhi police. Employing children below the age of 14 is illegal in India But millions of children are emloyed as child labourers in homes and factories. Most of the 500 rescued children worked in textile factories, doing intricate embroidery work. Many parents say crippling poverty forces them to send their children, sometimes as young as 5 or 6, to work in people's homes or even factories. Most of these children are made to work in unhealthy conditions for very long hours and are poorly paid.
" Normally they work in small rooms, poorly ventillated and badly lit. And most work for more than 10 hours a day", says M.Rajan, the managing trustee of Pratham, the NGO which collected the data on these children.
In south Delhi's commercial district of Bhikaji Cama Place- where a temporary shelter has been set up by the NGO for the rescued children- some 60 boys occupy a large hall.
Most children in this room appear unhappy and confused even thought they have been rescued from their employers. At least a dozen hands go up when Pratham volunteers ask them who wants to go back to work. Many say they are concerned about their clothes and belongings, left behind at the factories where they worked. Pratham volunteers say some of the children have even tried to escape from the shelter.
Mohammad Ramzani tells me he is 16 years old. But he looks no more than nine. He came to Delhi two months ago and worked in a handicrafts firm. He worked eight hours every day and at the end of the months, his manager sent 300rupees to his mother in Katihar,in Bihar state. " I do not really like working, but I have no choice", says Ramzani. He knows his mother and his younger brother depend on his earnings.