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elmadrilene



Nombre de messages : 2
Date d'inscription : 24/09/2010

MessageSujet: Lettre en anglais   Ven 24 Sep - 16:08

Salut, je suis en terminale S et j'ai un DM à faire en anglais qui consiste à rédiger une lettre à son ami en lui racontant ses vacances.
C'est donc ce que j'ai fait et j'aimerais si possible avoir des corrections sur mon travail, merci.

Hey dude, how it’s going?

I hope you are having fun in Paris! I’m writing to you to tell you about my holiday. During these holidays, I was in… LOS ANGELES!!! Yes bro!!! And more precisely in HOLLYWOOD!!! It was awesome! When I arrived in LAX (the airport of Los Angeles), everything was wonderful: the weather, the cars and even, the girls… Furthermore, people are of a kind incredible. I stayed in a hotel with swimming pool near of the famous boulevard, Hollywood boulevard.

But the most incredible was the visit to Universal Studio, where they do films.
It was fantastic! I learned a lot of techniques about special effects so it was funny and enriching. I saw where they turned your favorite series, Desperate Housewives.
In fact the series is turned in a phantom district specially created for it. Then, I made an incredible attraction on the theme of Simpson.

Otherwise I was also in VENICE BEACH in particular in the principal avenue which is incredible because people are so simple, dress as they want and where there is a heap of street shows and unusual.

Finally, the best rest the visit of the staple center where there was the ceremony for Michael Jackson who was, you know it, my favorite artist! And you know what?! On the Hollywood boulevard, to keep him in my thoughts, I took a photo on his star and with his double! That was a very moving moment and I know well that there will be never two as him! Moreover, I put a rose and a word on his star …

Otherwise, Los Angeles has there not to say, it’s really a heaven on Earth.

See you later,
KARIM xxx
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Doudou



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Date d'inscription : 26/12/2005

MessageSujet: Re: Lettre en anglais   Sam 25 Sep - 21:41

Salut, Karim.

Hey dude, how it’s going?

I hope you are having fun in Paris! I’m writing to you to tell you about my holiday. During this holiday, I was in… LOS ANGELES!!! Yes, bro!!! And more precisely in HOLLYWOOD!!! It was awesome! When I arrived in LAX (the Los Angeles International Airport), everything was wonderful: the weather, the cars, and even the girls… Furthermore, the people there are kind of incredible. I stayed in a hotel with a swimming pool near the famous Hollywood Boulevard.

But the most incredible part was the visit to Universal Studios, where they make films. It was fantastic! I learned a lot of techniques about special effects, so it was funny and enriching. I saw where they shoot (ou make) your favorite series, Desperate Housewives. In fact, the series is shot (ou made) on a movie lot especially created for it.

Then, I made an incredible attraction on the theme of Simpson. je comprends pas

And I was also on VENICE BEACH, in particular on the main avenue, which is incredible because people there are so natural. They dress as they want, and where there are a lot of street shows and unusual attractions.

Finally, the best part of the trip was my visit to the Staples Center where there was the ceremony for Michael Jackson who was, as you know, my favorite artist! And you know what?! On the Hollywood Boulevard, to keep him in my thoughts, I took a photo of his star on the Hollywood Walk of Fame, and I posed with his double so I would always remember him! That was a very moving moment, and I know very well there will never be another one like him! What's more, I put a rose and and wrote a word on his star …

In addition to everything else, there isn't much more I could say about Los Angeles. It’s really heaven on Earth.

See you later,
KARIM xxx

Je dois avouer que, malgré les petites fautes que t'as faites, ta maîtrise de l'anglais est vraiment impressionante !

Dis, tu peux poster la photo de toi à côté du double de Michael Jackson ?


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elmadrilene



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Date d'inscription : 24/09/2010

MessageSujet: Re: Lettre en anglais   Dim 26 Sep - 5:25

Bonjour,

je te remercie beaucoup pour cette correction.

Et voici ma photo:

A bientôt peut-être Very Happy
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Doudou



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Date d'inscription : 26/12/2005

MessageSujet: Re: Lettre en anglais   Dim 26 Sep - 8:32

Merci pour la photo, Karim. Michael Jackson's double couldn't look more like him! (C'est tout le portrait du vrai Jacko !) Et j'aime ton gant. T'es libre à revenir pour de l'aide autant de fois que tu voudras.

By the way, what's your major? (Tu te spécialises en quoi ?)

Ed (Doudou)
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