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MessageSujet: correction (etude de graphiques)   correction (etude de graphiques) Icon_minitimeLun 13 Nov - 13:28

Hell0 doudou.
Alrs bon week-end? ^^ bn ce n'est pas le sujet de mon post (malheureusement).

A partir de graphiques du manuel, je dois poser des questions et ensuite y répondre.

What is the poucentage of black women's and men's life expectancy?
Their latest years, it's around 65% for black mens. The life expectancy for black womens is a little higher, as (chez) the white population: womens life more long than mens. But in general, life expectancy is inferior to whites.

Le 2e graph que j'ai regardé pour poser ma question porte comme titre "teen alcohol and cigarette use % of 12th graders who in the last 30 days" :s je n'ai compris que "Pourcentage d'usage de l'alcool et cigarette chez les ados" mais je ne comprends pas bien la suite...
Enfin bref, par intuition j'ai posé comme question:
What can we say about pourcentage of "smoked cigarettes" and "got drunk"?
We can think alcohol and cigarette are more in the whites's way of life. Because the difference of pourcentage between "smoked cigarettes" and "got drunk" to whites and blacks is enormous. The pourcentage is tripled to (chez) whites.

What is the evolution of unemployment for blacks and whites?
The unemployment rate of blacks is always twice as high as whites. But, it falls. In fact, it reachs 15% in 1980 and 9% in 1998. We can ask for, if, for this reason, poor black people is higher.

What this second graphic economic reveals about the poor percent of people below poverty line?
The pourcentage of people below poverty line is worrying. Their latest years, (il a pu atteindre) 40%. Almost half of black population. Today is above 25%.
As every graphic we can notice that, even if, difference between blacks and whites in the Us exists always, it evolve in common sense.

(warf ça doit être bourré de fautes...j'en suis presque désolée )

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MessageSujet: Re: correction (etude de graphiques)   correction (etude de graphiques) Icon_minitimeLun 13 Nov - 15:44

Bonsoir, Betty Boop.

What is the percentage of life expectancy among black women and black men?
According to the latest statistics, it's around 65% for black men. The life expectancy for black women is a little higher, compared to the white population where a woman's life expectancy is longer than a man's. But in general, the life expectancy of blacks is inferior to that of whites.

Le 2e graph que j'ai regardé pour poser ma question porte comme titre "teen alcohol and cigarette use % of 12th graders who in the last 30 days" :s je n'ai compris que "Pourcentage d'usage de l'alcool et cigarette chez les ados" mais je ne comprends pas bien la suite...
12th graders : étudiants de la classe terminale aux É-U (entre 17 et 18 ans)
in the last 30 days : durant les 30 derniers jours

What can we say about percentage of "smoked cigarettes" and "drunkeness"?
We can assume that alcohol and cigarettes are more representative of white people's lifestyles because the percentage difference of "smoked cigarettes" and "drunkeness between" whites and blacks is enormous. The percentage is triple among whites.

What is the evolution of unemployment for blacks and whites?
The unemployment rate for blacks is always twice as high as for whites. But, it has fallen. In fact, it reached 15% in 1980 and 9% in 1998. We may well wonder why it is higher for black people.

What does this second economic graph reveal about the poor percent of people below poverty line?
The percentage of people below the poverty line is worrying. In the past, it had even reached 40%: almost half of the black population. Today it is above 25%.

In each graph, we can seethat, even though there have always been differences between whites and blacks in the US, it evolve in common sense. incompréhensible

Je n'ai pas compris ce que tu voulais dire à chaque fois que tu as écrit their latest years, ce qui n'existe pas en anglais.

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