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MessageSujet: Small essay   Mer 17 Déc - 18:39

Hello Doudou can you check my essay please ? cheers

The WWII started at the end of the years 1939 and Hitler’s armies led off to invade the Eastern Europe and Western Europe. Hitler wanted to attack the USSR but to fulfill his desire of crushing his enemy he had to protect his south flank. That is why thanks to the help of his Italian allied, Hitler’s armies invaded the Balkan and Greece.
To invade Greece, the German headquarter decided to use a new tactic. This new tactic was very innovative because it used paratroopers on a large scale. This tactics were use on the Crete for the first time of the history.
the greatest number of paratroopers were droped on the three main airfield of Crete. Everything goes very fast and the allied were taken by surprise and forced to capitulate.
The invasion of Crete was one of the most important operations of the WWII and will used as a model for the next operation at the same time for the allied and the axe.
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MessageSujet: Re: Small essay   Mer 17 Déc - 20:40

Hi, Phil.

The WWII started at the end of the years 1939 and Hitler’s armies led off to invade the Eastern Europe and Western Europe.
World War II began at the end of 1939, and Hitler's armies went off to invade Eastern and Western Europe.
Hitler wanted to attack the USSR but to fulfill his desire of crushing his enemy he had to protect his south flank.
Hilter planned to attack the USSR, but to fulfill his desire of crushing the enemy, he had to protect his south flank.
That is why thanks to the help of his Italian allied, Hitler’s armies invaded the Balkan and Greece.
Thanks to the help of his Italian ally, Hitler's armies invaded the Balkans and Greece.
To invade Greece, the German headquarter decided to use a new tactic.
To invade Greece, German headquarters decided to use a new tactic.
This new tactic was very innovative because it used paratroopers on a large scale. Very Happy
This tactics were use on the Crete for the first time of the history.
These tactics were used on the island of Crete for the first time in history.
the greatest number of paratroopers were droped on the three main airfield of Crete.
The largest number of paratroopers were dropped on the three main airfields of Crete.
Everything goes very fast and the allied were taken by surprise and forced to capitulate.
Everything went very fast, and the allies were taken by surprise and forced to capitualate.
The invasion of Crete was one of the most important operations of the WWII and will used as a model for the next operation at the same time for the allied and the axe.
The invasion of Crete was one of the most important operations in WWII, and was to be used as a model for the next operation by both the allies and the axis countries.
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