a letter

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After one year in New Zealand, Liam writes to Conor to tell him how things turned out.





Dear brother,


I hope you are feeling well. As for me, I'm fine and happy to be here.
As I have told you in the past; New- Zealand is the better plan to find a good job.
Certainly, first steps were very difficult. Nothing here is like to Ireland. But I quickly find a job as farmer and drover. What's more, my boss is nice. He helped me often and he gives me all days the diner. I think also that he would even give me his daughter to married. But it is a secret among we ok?
Now, I am ever paying my passage. In fact, I regret noting because life is better here. I still will work eleven months then I could buy my own.
You know that I miss you very much Conor and daddy too. So, how is he?
Liam, when I will have enough money I want to return to Ireland. Here, I have some friends but family is irreplaceable.

I expect impatiently a letter from you.

Lots of love.

Your brother,

Liam.

Je sais pas, pourquoi. Peut être pour rapprocher les deux personnes. C'est mieux de dire dear Conor?

En anglais c'est ce qu'on fait d'habitude s'adressant à un membre de sa famille, sauf les parents.

ok merci beaucouuuuup DOUDOU

You're quite welcome, Mimi. C'est toujours un plaisir.