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MessageSujet: a letter   Mar 28 Oct - 16:06

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After one year in New Zealand, Liam writes to Conor to tell him how things turned out.



July 19, 1963
Otago


Dear brother,


I hope you are feeling well. As for me, I'm fine and happy to be here.
As I have told you in the past; New- Zealand is the better plan to find a good job.
Certainly, first steps were very difficult. Nothing here is like to Ireland. But I quickly find a job as farmer and drover. What's more, my boss is nice. He helped me often and he gives me all days the diner. I think also that he would even give me his daughter to married. But it is a secret among we ok?
Now, I am ever paying my passage. In fact, I regret noting because life is better here. I still will work eleven months then I could buy my own.
You know that I miss you very much Conor and daddy too. So, how is he?
Liam, when I will have enough money I want to return to Ireland. Here, I have some friends but family is irreplaceable.

I expect impatiently a letter from you.

Lots of love.

Your brother,

Liam.
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MessageSujet: Re: a letter   Mar 28 Oct - 20:19

Dear brother, Pourquoi pas, Dear Connor ?


I hope you are feeling well. As for me, I'm fine and happy to be here. As I have told you in the past, New Zealand (aucun trait d'union) is the best place to find a good job. Without a doubt, the first steps were very difficult. New Zealand is nothing like Ireland, but I quickly got a job as a farmer and a driver. What's more, my boss is nice. He has helped me often, and he feeds me dinner every day. I think he'd also like me to marry his daughter. But that's between you and me, OK?

Now, I'm able to pay my own way. In fact, I have no regrets because life is better here. I plan to work for another 11 months and then go into business for myself.

You know that I miss you very much, and Daddy too. So, how is he?

Connor, when I've saved up enough money, I want to return to Ireland. I have friends here, but nothing can take the place of family.

Please write soon.

Lots of love.

Your brother,

Liam.
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mimi

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MessageSujet: Re: a letter   Mer 29 Oct - 9:34

Je sais pas, pourquoi. Peut être pour rapprocher les deux personnes. C'est mieux de dire dear Conor?
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MessageSujet: Re: a letter   Mer 29 Oct - 22:27

En anglais c'est ce qu'on fait d'habitude s'adressant à un membre de sa famille, sauf les parents. Smile
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MessageSujet: Re: a letter   Jeu 30 Oct - 14:58

ok merci beaucouuuuup DOUDOU flower
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MessageSujet: Re: a letter   Jeu 30 Oct - 21:42

You're quite welcome, Mimi. C'est toujours un plaisir. sunny
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