Study Hall
Study Hall

(Aide aux devoirs)
 
AccueilFAQS'enregistrerConnexion

Partagez | 
 

 Live in United States.

Voir le sujet précédent Voir le sujet suivant Aller en bas 
AuteurMessage
mimi

avatar

Nombre de messages : 115
Date d'inscription : 15/02/2006

MessageSujet: Live in United States.   Mer 15 Oct - 9:53

Bonjour Doudou,

Peux tu corriger mes fautes s'il te plait.
J'espére que tu vas comprendre.... Embarassed



Would you like to live for a while in the United States? Why or why not?


Nowadays, United States have a large influence on the World. All of people know American's music, films, styles…..
Many young people would like to live in United States for several reasons.



For my self, I'm aware of that United States are attracts and interesting Country.
If I can go in US, I would can to improve my English language. In addition I would happy to live in a free State with a social equality. It's also easier to find a good job in United State than in Europe. So, I would want to live in US for a while to discover the mode of life in America and to more speak English.

However, I wouldn't supersede two years in US. Actually, I'm attached to country where I am born and grow up. I think also that I can't support American city's noise and pollution. What's more I believe that to have a good life in US you must be an employer or have many certificates. Actually, life is not really easy to live in United State. For example, insurance medical are expensive for a modest person.
In fact, I prefer go in US during holiday to visit America and to make shopping. It's also an occasion to speak English.


As a conclusion, I think that US are more a good destination of holiday than a residence locality. I believe also that people who are born and live in US wouldn't leave their Country for another.
Finally, in think that in generally, many of people in World dream to live in United States.
Revenir en haut Aller en bas
Lysias1148

avatar

Nombre de messages : 100
Date d'inscription : 09/02/2008

MessageSujet: Re: Live in United States.   Mer 15 Oct - 19:12

salut!

- All of people:Everyone
- "For my self, I'm aware of that United States": je trouve bizarre et je ne pense pas que ça soit correct: "Selon moi, je suis consciens que..." on dira plutôt "Selon moi, les Etats-Unis sont..." ou "Je suis consciens que les Etat-s Unis". = In my opinion, The United States are attractives as much as interesting
- "If I can go in US, I would can to improve my
English language. In addition I would happy to live in a free State
with a social equality. It's also easier to find a good job in United
State than in Europe. So, I would want to live in US for a while to
discover the mode of life in America and to more speak English."
If I could go to the United States, I would be able to improve my English. In addition to that, I would be pleased to live in a country with social equality and where freedom dominates. That's why I'd like to live in the US for a while to discover the American way of life and practise my English.
- "I think also that I can't support American city's noise and pollution."
I also think that I won't bear the noise and the pollution of American cities
- "I prefer go"
I prefer going to the US
- "
to make shopping"
to do the shopping
- " I think that US are more a good destination of holiday than a residence locality."
I think that the US are a better holiday destination than a residence locality.
- "I believe also"
I also believe
- "many of people in World dream to live in United States."
Many people/ a lot of people in the world dream about living in the US.

Bien sûr, il vaudrait mieu attendre Doudou. Mais sinon je pense qu'il faut dire "the United States".


Dernière édition par Lysias1148 le Jeu 16 Oct - 22:28, édité 1 fois
Revenir en haut Aller en bas
mimi

avatar

Nombre de messages : 115
Date d'inscription : 15/02/2006

MessageSujet: Re: Live in United States.   Jeu 16 Oct - 1:28

merci pour votre aide!
Revenir en haut Aller en bas
Contenu sponsorisé




MessageSujet: Re: Live in United States.   

Revenir en haut Aller en bas
 
Live in United States.
Voir le sujet précédent Voir le sujet suivant Revenir en haut 
Page 1 sur 1
 Sujets similaires
-
» [Autorité héraldique] United States Heraldic Registry
» vente patch US Army Service Forces
» (rond de fumé provoqué par l'explosion d'un projecteur) Ovni en live à Seattle
» el jazzera en live
» tchat live le 28/02 crystal-nems

Permission de ce forum:Vous ne pouvez pas répondre aux sujets dans ce forum
Study Hall :: Devoirs maison :: anglais (grammaire, rédacs courtes, trads courtes}-
Sauter vers: