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Nombre de messages : 8 Date d'inscription : 15/06/2008

donc voilà quelqu'un a besoin d'aide et voici son exposé :

Bonjour,

Je prépare actuellement un concours avec une épreuve de langue je viens de faire une annale qui comporte une dissertation de 150 mots auriez vous la gentillesse de me l'annoter.

In the United States legal immigrants and illegal immigrants have the same civil rights, it depends on the state.

It must be acknowledged that in America much illegal immigrants cross the American Mexican border and take part in the American thriving economy but they have not all the time the same civil rights that American citizens. It depends of the states’ rules. So it is undeniable that the question of the civil rights in the United States is tied to the illegal immigration.

But in the debate about illegal immigration, only civil rights are not at stakes. Human rights which are different from civil rights must be inserting in the debate about illegal immigration. Actually Human rights of illegal immigrants are not all the time respected.

In a nutshell the heated debate about civil rights must be inserting in the debate of the illegal immigration but it shouldn’t have confusion.

Cordialement
jo

Salut, Jo. Laughing

... je viens de faire une annale ... - Ça veut dire quoi exactement ?
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In the United States legal immigrants and illegal immigrants have the same civil rights, it depends on the state.
In the United States, both legal and illegal immigrants have the same civil rights depending on what state they live in.

It must be acknowledged that in America much illegal immigrants cross the American Mexican border and take part in the American thriving economy but they have not all the time the same civil rights that American citizens. It depends of the states’ rules. So it is undeniable that the question of the civil rights in the United States is tied to the illegal immigration.
It should be noted that in the US, many illegal Mexican immigrants cross the border separating Mexico and the US for the purpose of taking advantage of America's thriving economy; but as illegals, they rarely enjoy the same civil rights as American citizens. How illegals are treated depends on the rules of the state they live in. So it is an undeniable fact that the question of civil rights in the United States is tied to the question of illegal immigration.

But in the debate about illegal immigration, only civil rights are not at stakes. Human rights which are different from civil rights must be inserting in the debate about illegal immigration. Actually Human rights of illegal immigrants are not all the time respected.
However, in the debate about illegal immigration, the question of civil rights isn't the only issue at stake. Human rights, which are different from civil rights, must be also be considered in the debate about illegal immigration. Actually, the human rights of illegal immigrants aren't always respected.

In a nutshell the heated debate about civil rights must be inserting in the debate of the illegal immigration but it shouldn’t have confusion.
In a nutshell, the heated debate over civil rights for illegals must give equal consideration to their human rights. These two issues must not be confused with each other.
c'est pour quelqu'un Immigrationusa

Nombre de messages : 8 Date d'inscription : 15/06/2008

Merci Doudou

You're welcome, Jo. I'm here whenever you or one of your friends needs me. T'as compris ?

Ed

Nombre de messages : 8 Date d'inscription : 15/06/2008

Enfin.......ouais lol j'ai compris le sens.

Salut, Jo.

Je suis ravi que tu en as saisi le sens. Ce que j'ai dit précisément c'est que je suis là chaque fois où tu aurais besoin d'aide ainsi qu'un(e) ami(e).

Nombre de messages : 8 Date d'inscription : 15/06/2008

C'est ce que j'avais pensé Smile

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