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MessageSujet: vérification rédaction   Dim 30 Mar - 7:06

Hi, Doudou

Can you correct my assignment please ? bounce

In according with a study in Norway, premature infants are more predisposed to die during their childhood than healthy children.
Moreover those children are less fertile and could have more premature babies.
Premature could need intensive care. For instance in UK about 17,000 babies are in intensive car per 80,000 premature babies.

In Norway, people who were born between 1967 and 1976 are recorded on a knowledge base. Those practical provide to show that there is 60,654 premature per 1,167,506 births.
This study deals with that mortality rates are really much higher for premature in early childhood (5.3 times) and in late childhood (2.5 times).

At least there is not much survival for the early premature babies.

However, even if those children run a high risk than regular children, we have to admit that the absolute level of mortality is low.

Nevertheless for premature is harder to have a baby and finish high school

Premature children need special treatments. Indeed, parents must be aware of that their own child must have particular focus.

To sum up many diagnosis report that multiple pregnancy, gestational diabetes or stressful can involve premature birth.
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MessageSujet: Re: vérification rédaction   Dim 30 Mar - 10:32

According to a study in Norway, premature infants are more predisposed to die during their childhood than healthy children. Moreover those children are less fertile as surviving adults and could have more premature babies of their own. Premies will almost always need intensive care. For instance 17,000 out of 80,000 premature babies in the UK are in intensive care.

In Norway, the names of people who were born between 1967 and 1976 are recorded in a database which shows that there are 60,654 premature births per 1,167,506.

This study deals with the fact that mortality rates are really much higher for babies born prematurely in early childhood (5.3 times) and in late childhood (2.5 times). The survival rate for babies born prematurely is very low to say the least. However, even if those children run a higher risk than regular children, we have to admit that the overall mortality rate is low.

Nevertheless, two facts are in evidence: children who were born prematurely will have more difficulty finishing high school and getting pregnant. Premature children also need specialized medical care. In fact, parents of premature babies must be aware that their child's well-being must be the main focus of their attention.

To sum up, many diagnosticians report that multiple pregnancies, gestational diabetes, or a stressful lifestyle may be responsible for premature births.
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