correction de fautes

hé oui encore moi et j'ai encore u oral a préparer bon cette fois ci j'ai ésséyé de me débrouiller toute seule seulement je pense que quelques fautes doivent se balader (bon d'accord il doit y en avoir pas mal)
alors si vous pouviez jetter un petit coup d'oeuil se serait sympa
merci d'avance

ps: cet redaction traite de l'obésité dans le monde et des régimes. Si vous avez du mal a comprendre c'est normal car je ne vous envoie pas toutes les photos qu'elle contient.





Obesity: the threat of a world epidemic

The world grows bigger! And France is not in remainder, with 40% of the population too much gross. But from which this “epidemic comes” from obesity? Why the overweight progress does in a so vertiginous way? Who are the most touched people? The point on a worrying phenomenon.

One speaks today about a true epidemic of obesity which does not save any more any area of the world. From Canada in Europe while passing by China, this phenomenon reaches the United States particularly.

With more than 55% of the population suffering from ponderal overload, the United States holds the sad record of people suffering from overweight. Obesity and the overweight constitute true problems of public health.
The United States touched by grease
Obesity and the overweight are particularly present in certain American minorities, like at the people having an low income and a low level of education. Not less than 97 million adult American are thus too large.

According to last figures' published by the prestigious medical review Newspaper off the Medical American Association (JAMA) 1, the rate of obesity further increased in 1999 in the USA. This rise of 5,6% per annum represents a doubling of the number of obese American since 1991, in spite of the messages of sensitizing and the many ones of studies denouncing the health risks related to obesity. It increases, inter alia, the risk of cardiovascular diseases, cancer and diabetes. The diabetes in particular increased by 76% at the thirty year ones and 33% in the American general population between 1990 and 1998
In 1991, obesity was at the origin of at least 300.000 deaths each year on the other side of the Atlantic and only the tobacco would make more deaths.
France worried by infantile obesity
The emergent countries are not saved either: 60% of the Mexican population would be too large. In Egypt, 35% of the population are obese, in Saudi Arabia, 24% of the women are obese and 40% of the women in Kuwait.
In France, the increase in the number of obese would be less important and would concern especially the young women. According to an investigation of INSEE, in 1991, 7% of the women were obese against 6,3% in 1980, whereas this disease does not seem to progress to the men (6,5% in 1991 against 6,4% in 1980). Lastly, in a study carried out near the conscripts, it appeared that the proportion of the overweight compared to the general population passes from 11,5 to 16,5% between 1987 and 1996 and that of the obesity from 1,5 to 3,1%.
Last June the INSERM4 revealed that a child on 10 is obese at the 10 years age. According to this institute, obesity involves disastrous effects on health at the adulthood. “In the obese child, of the anomalies appear, such as an increase in the blood pressure or cholesterol. In the children having a severe obesity, apnea of the sleep can start, as well as orthopedic pathologies. Very early cases of diabetes are described, in the United States, at teenagers having a severe obesity ".
Students of the West of Virginia and Mali carried out scientific surveys while following the population in their community. They directed research by controlling their diet, exercise, index of body mass, and the rate of heartbeat.


Many more students of Mali has a low mode in grease and sugar refinery and does as many sports as the students of Virginia, one can thus deduce from it that IMC are less low to them.

merci beaucoup vous m'avez encore été d'une grande aide