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Miss67



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Date d'inscription : 27/12/2006

MessageSujet: Rédaction   Dim 6 Mai - 5:20

bonjour j'ai une redaction a faire en anglais je voulez demandez si vous voulezbien lme corriger svp ? Surprised


During the holiday

During the holidays I usvally with 10 oclock
The evenings I to look at the tele one or sometimes I to play the computer . I am not go to the cinema it had not new there .
The pisine I was to thus close am not to go. I made shopping with Orsay
One go visit with friends each days at quequn as I do not like sport I in did not make.
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MessageSujet: Re: Rédaction   Dim 6 Mai - 15:52

Salut, Miss.

During the holidays I usvally with 10 oclock
During the holidays, I usually got up at 10 o'clock in the morning.
The evenings I to look at the tele one or sometimes I to play the computer .
In the evening, I would either watch the tele or play with my computer.
I am not go to the cinema it had not new there .
I didn't go to the cinema because they weren't showing any new films.
The pisine I was to thus close am not to go. I made shopping with Orsay
The swimming pool was closed, so I couldn't go there. Instead, I went shopping with Orsay.
One go visit with friends each days at quequn as I do not like sport I in did not make.
All I could really do is go visit my friends since I don't like sports and didn't want to participate in any sports activities.

Ed
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