Bonjour Doudou, comment allez-vous ?
Moi, je suis débordée, j’ai trop de devoir et plus du tout de temps libre ! eh oui… c’est difficile le lycée ! lol.
Alors voilà, j’ai une petite rédaction à faire pour mardi ( minimum : 100 mots) (sujet ci dessous)
j’aimerais que vous corrigez mes fautes car je suis certaine que j’ai commis plusieurs fautes de grammaire, de langue, de conjugaison etc.…. et me dire ce que vous en pensez si possible.
Je vous remercie.
Sujet : If you won the lottery, what charity would you help and why ?
There are many charities in the word, only in the UK there are 180.000 charities. It’s difficult to prefer one charity because I think that they are all important.
Yet, if I were rich I would help OXFAM and CHILDERN IN NEED. I gave half my money to OXFAM and the other half to CHILDERN NEED. I choose the both charities because women and children are really fell people. There are more and more women who are attack and aggress; they know violence in the street or from her husband. It’s shocking for me ! In effect this women suffer so I would help them. I would help children too as I love children and I don’t accept that there are disabled, unfortunate and unhappy children without help. Normally they must go to school, play with their friends, laugh… but it’s impossible for them. This children have need of charitable people in order to feel better.
Finally, I thing that the actions of all charities are formidable because they help many people likewise animals, environment… for a better word.