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MessageSujet: Death Penalty.   Lun 18 Déc - 14:13

Bjr.

Ok pour but et because. J'ai fait attention de ne pas refaire la même erreur.

Most people are for death penalty for the feeling of vengeance. The South of America is the region where there is highest of executions due to the mentalities: people are more conservative and there is more religious bigotry. As says the old testament “an eye for an eye” “a tooth for a tooth”. And it’s a representation of vengeance. But there is an opposition because in the ten commandments it said also “you shall not kill”. People for death penalty think it is dissuasive for criminals. But in reality I think it’s false because criminality rage is six times as big in the US as France or United Kingdom. For one of this reasons, I am against it. If justice promotes death penalty, it promotes murder. It’s easy to kill. We must find solutions less barbaric to put to death, than gas chamber, electric chair, death by injection, death by hanging. Moreover, Justice can make mistakes and lead a man injustly in death row. For instance, false confessions can be made because of coercion or misunderstanding. And miscarriage of justice is irreparable. Go to jail seems the better solution even if in some countries it’s like to death slowly.


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MessageSujet: Re: Death Penalty.   Lun 18 Déc - 17:19

Bonsoir, Betty Boop.

J'apprécie beaucoup ton attention aux corrections que j'ai faites.
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Most people are for death penalty out of feelings of vengeance. The American South is the region where there is the highest number of executions due to differing cultural mentalities: people are more conservative in the South, and there is more religious bigotry there. As the Old Testament says, “an eye for an eye, a tooth for a tooth." The death penalty is also a call for vengeance. But there is an apparent contradiction in the Bible because in the Ten Commandments, it also says,Thou shall not kill.” People for the death penalty think it serves as a deterrent for criminals; but in reality, I think it’s false because the crime rate is six times as large in the US as compared to France or United Kingdom. For this reason, I am against it. If justice promotes the death penalty, it is promoting murder. It’s easy to kill. We must find less barbaric solutions in applying the dealth penalty than the gas chamber, the electric chair, death by injection, or death by hanging. Moreover, the criminal justice system can make mistakes and and unjustly place a man on death row. For instance, false confessions can be made because of coercion or misunderstanding. Such miscarriages of justice are irreparable. Going to jail seems the better solution even if in some countries it represents a slow death.

Bien écrit. Je te recommande cependant d'éviter les phrases commençant par and et but. Je m'excuse d'être tellement méticuleux ; mais comme la chirurgie, c'est nécessaire.

Ed
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